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    dots Submission Name: killing spreedots
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    Author: Cannablisjunkie
    ASL Info:    22/Male/Indianapolis, IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 77/147/87
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotskilling spreedots
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    Inside I hide,
    the beast that lyes in me.

    Glowing eyes,
    massive canines,
    that shine viciously.

    New found thirst for blood:
    I seek my prey
    while knowingly
    there could only be
    one perfect quary for me.

    So what's the story?
    You never said,
    jus' up n left.

    With no good-byes,
    just wasted cries for you
    in the end.

    there's no end.
    there's no ending to this.




    Submitted on 2006-01-12 12:28:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Really good write. You have a style of your own that is awesome. I love the stanza...

    New found thirst for blood:
    I seek my prey
    while knowingly
    there could only be
    one perfect quary for me.
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by indianhog74 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow its really good but i think you could of gone in a lil more details but ti was great its a really great poem i felt mad and sad at the same time were you sad or mad or anything when you wrote it?
    great job
    ~Jenn
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by James Wiffy | [ Reply to This ]


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