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    dots Submission Name: Crown of the Northdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 512
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 290



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    "IT's" whatever you make "IT"

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    Destiny
    was the mountain
    made small
    upon the horizon
    "IT's"
    Crown of the North

    Awake
    w
    a
    r
    everything
    m
    b
    r
    a
    c
    e








    Submitted on 2006-01-12 15:06:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very unusual, and delightful to read and speculate upon...

    | Posted on 2011-06-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought it was great, again very unique and written very well. I especially like the acrostic (?) part. Very good, as usual.

    Leah
    | Posted on 2006-02-15 00:00:00 | by ZXDPrince | [ Reply to This ]
      I was able to enjoy this because it reminded me of a code or a puzzle like someof your other poem. I love the way you can take anything in nature and make this wonderful poem. You have a gift. The fact you kept this short made the reader focus on the mountain. And the last part can be taken in so many ways. another clever poem by you.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      U make me awake and aware of everything around me, thanx. Your creativity as always astounds me. This is so short and so powerful.
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      A short little poem yet filled with so much! A mountain so massive and majestic yet when compared to the horizon, it seems so small. I like the form you have used here and the words that run down the left side really add lots of meaning! This one could be interpreted in so many ways and any way you interpret it, so much meaning is there. A wonderful poem this is! Your connection with nature is awesome! Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Frank basically summed it up pretty well, its a bit short but still gets the point across. Keep it up and I'll be sure to read the rest of your pieces.
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by LongShot | [ Reply to This ]
      See what you feel and feel what you see - mountains and all. The life of a mountain is its destiny.

    Again simple, but well written and the message is clear.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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