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    dots Submission Name: The Killing Of The Birdsdots
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    Author: vampire
    ASL Info:    18 y/o female, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 16/16/6
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 176
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    Bytes: 880



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       my birdie flew away...


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    dotsThe Killing Of The Birdsdots
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    There is quiet in the shadows,
    These shadows in my mind,
    But voices haunt the echoes
    Of what we shared when we were blind.
    And around wells of sorrow
    Gleams a damp and weary light,
    Gleaming tears of agony
    That stream on throughout the night.
    Only half a soul in darkness,
    The dimness of each word,
    Falters in the silence—
    The killing of the birds.
    But I see you in the dungeon,
    Weeping with this corpse,
    That writhes in the missing
    Of you, while the worlds morphs
    Into demons…
    With fangs bared and laughing
    Laughing at the death,
    Laughing at the torture
    They create with just their breath.
    Hear me among the voices
    Confusing in your mind,
    Hear me, I beg you recall,
    What we shared when we were blind.




    Submitted on 2006-01-12 16:04:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      woo, this sended chills down my spine! well spoken, and creative. It gave me the image of prisoners being tortured, you know, that whole creepy scene. You are wise at your words, young one.

    mistress acaia
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by mistress acaia | [ Reply to This ]



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