I like this piece very well. Some of these things I tried to explain to my boyfriend when we first got together. I was afraid to trust him and afraid of being hurt again. I can relate to this poem and I especially liked the lines
I was so scared to feel this way being hurt before but you manage to take my fear away and i'm loving you more and more.
I can understand the things you say in this poem, but I feel like you left me hanging at the end. It would be great if you added a bit more, but then again every poem is unique and even though it wouldn't hurrt to add a bit, it wouldn't hurt to leave it the way it is. I really like this and either way your poem goes I think it awesome. I'm adding it as one of my favorites. Hope you and writing go well for you. 5 ~*AnGeL*~
this is a very cute peice and the evidence of how you feel is written throughout the entire peice which keeps up witht he consistency and gives the peice a sense of unity. personally i think that the subject matter is not unique but more like a belly button topic meaning everyone has one but the word usage and the way it is written makes this peice unique to you. which is a great thing, i think that this is very well written over all and the rhyme and rythm is very good over all i think that you did a great job and i hope i did not offend you with my earlier comments. the wonder of new love is always the best hold on to it as long as possible. good luck with everything...Joy