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    dots Submission Name: Energy of Lovedots
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    Author: Chihuahuii
    ASL Info:    16/f/Cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 75/90/36
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 340
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       A short poem on the feeling, ups and downs of THINKING you're in love. It was study hall, and I was bored.


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    dotsEnergy of Lovedots
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    Energy.
    Been wishing for it lately.
    That odd sense of awareness, a pressured rush,
    A tumble, roll,
    A kick, a punch,
    A kiss, I miss
    That energy.

    A memory so close by,
    I often hear it prickling somewhere near,
    And sometimes even feel it,
    As if a butterfly somehow lodged itself inside my heart
    And every wings'flap brings a new sensation:
    Trembling, smiling, frowning, crying,
    Loving, like a little baby boy
    Wrapped in my arms where he belongs
    The butterfly boy's little fingers touch mind
    And a palm up my spine traces every wound
    Like healing herbs.

    To stand aside,
    Just him and I
    And feel a wisp of spring again.
    A tumble, roll,
    A kick, a punch,
    A kiss, I've missed
    That energy.




    Submitted on 2006-01-13 08:33:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is a very beautiful piece where you describe almost the beginings of Depression
    Do not let the negativity of the World bring you down
    I can tell from your write you are a very positive person
    Let that energy guide you in your forward journey on this Earth
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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