When I was growing up
I wanted to be a princess
and I wanted to live in the clouds
With unicorns and faries.
I wanted to get away from "Him".
He would yell, He had a problem...
I wanted to fly away with
My pretend friends and
My baby brother.
Now "he" is gone.
But my dreams are now reality.
My unicorns and faries have turned
Into best friends.
The pretend ones have become real
And my clouds have turned into colleges.
Childhood dreams are gone
and my new life has begun.
Ive always liked this poem. Hey remember skipping creative writing after the PSAT to write it? That was cool. Well anyway I love the transition from begining to end where the unicorns were friends and castles were colleges! Very creative! :) .Amber.
Awww.Don't ask me how poetry could be cute but this poem is cute and if it had cheeks(ones of the face mind you)I would squeeze them.Sorry...had to make it humerous.I liked this poem it shows what children dream of and how it comes true.If you think about it thats exactly how it is but I dont think many people realize it.This gives out a good message to readers.Good write.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol i liked it i liked the way you keep he and not put the boys name it and allow us to pick on who u taking about yea not the best that you can do but still very very good ~Jenn
This is sweet. I like how you talk about you childhood dreams and don't really explain who "he" is, that leaves the reader to deside who you might be talking about. This is a good poem and I enjoyed it.