Description: Recently in my life it just seems as if no one cares about what goes on.Most of my friends could care less and it hurts really bad to see life like this.People you have always turned to are no longer there...:(
This is a very beatiful piece of poetry and also very sad, your heart does come through the words so well you did a wonderful job of expressing your emotions truely one of the best poems I have read I like this one so much that I am adding it to my fvorites and I will be reading more of your work in the future. keep up the great writing and hold on and do not lose faith. I honestly ejoyed this poem from beginning to end.
i loved it too i am also going to add it ro my faves it has great flow and my favorite line is a broken heart and soul of pain tears of a broken angel keep it up and don't lose heart if poeple tell it's not good beacause it's not true
I love this infact I'm going to add it to my favorites. I can relate to this. . . more last year than this year though. ANyway, keep pushing through I know it's hard but don't fall into temtaions. Things will work out in the end just give it time. This is a really good write though. Keep it up.
Submission Name: Fallen Angel
