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    dots Submission Name: Pure Blissdots
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    Author: harlequinforest
    ASL Info:    17 - female - ontario
    Elite Ratio:    1.69 - 1/6/2
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 271
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 467



    Description:
       I had a very emotional moment with the boy I am seeing. As I look back on that moment, this is the only way to describe it. Has anyone ever felt this way before ?


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    dotsPure Blissdots
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    It's like nothing I have ever felt before.
    Like unexpected raindrops falling on your skin.
    Cold, wet specks of water dancing on your body.
    As I tingle in every waking second, I experience purity.
    Like unfolded wings finding grace.
    As I raise my head to the sky,
    I feel the light cleanse my body.
    I open my eyes and I am lying in you arms.
    Pure bliss is in the form of you my dear.






    Submitted on 2006-01-13 21:57:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yeah, this is simple but cute. I had that feeling too. It's like electric sparks or raindrops tingling the nerve-endings. Good write!
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the way you describe love so simply. Can't really relate to it, 'cause I've never really felt that way before. When I feel something like this, then I'll know what is it. Nice.
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by whchong | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that this is a beautiful way to see love, I wish I could relate to it. I really like the way that you describe it so simply, but with such meaning behind it. I really liked it, well done.
    Regards, Kalinda
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ]
      This is your interperatation of love. I may not feel the same way when im in love but thats what makes this poem so great. You have a unique look on love. I know that love is hard to discribe and thats why i think this poem diserves my praise. Very well thought out with raw emotion. I love the fact that you feel so strongly about someone in your life to have made such a strong statement. Dont change a thing its perfect.
    | Posted on 2006-01-13 00:00:00 | by DiamondTears | [ Reply to This ]
      I've never felt like that before... But I'm sure others have.

    The words were great and the imagery is wonderful. It must be really hard to describe it, but its some raw feeling of climax.(I think? lol.) Thanks for sharing this.
    | Posted on 2006-01-13 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]



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