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Author: Drea
ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289 /142 /53
Words: 120
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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I took everything and turned it upside down and inside out.


Hot sweet winters day
Cold bitter summers night

Lost my heart, my mind is breaking
Falling into hate, Bumping my head on love

Walk in circles, talk a straight line
Be the bow, not the arrow

Muder those you love, pamper your enemies
Read the writer, burn the poem

Pray to Satan, stomp on God
Angels mislead, and demons guide right

Straght as a reain bow, crooked as a stripe
Spin the ipods, power up the records

Give the Christians pot, the hippies bibles
Girls put on condoms, Boys OD on Birth control

Daughters drink beers w/ mom, sons knit w/ dad
Emo's cheer @ peprally's, while cheerleaders slit their wrists

Submitted on 2006-01-14 03:50:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very nice, I personally have often dreampt of cheeleaders slitting their wirsts. anyways, i get the point, and appreciate the title, however it makes one wonnder, how much of this, is in fact
"SDRAWKCAB", I suppose everything is perspective though, right? take care
| Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
  Lol I love this. Unique and everything's topsy turvy.

"Girls put on condoms, Boys OD on Birth control"

I would really wonder how lol!

"Muder those you love, pamper your enemies
Read the writer, burn the poem"

But I think this line relates to me. Alot. I really don't know how to describe this but wow. AllI have to say is, good job.
| Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]

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