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    dots Submission Name: SDRAWKCABdots
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    Author: Drea
    ASL Info:    18/f/nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.79 - 289/142/53
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 868
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    Bytes: 798



    Description:
       I took everything and turned it upside down and inside out.


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    dotsSDRAWKCABdots
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    Hot sweet winters day
    Cold bitter summers night

    Lost my heart, my mind is breaking
    Falling into hate, Bumping my head on love

    Walk in circles, talk a straight line
    Be the bow, not the arrow

    Muder those you love, pamper your enemies
    Read the writer, burn the poem

    Pray to Satan, stomp on God
    Angels mislead, and demons guide right

    Straght as a reain bow, crooked as a stripe
    Spin the ipods, power up the records

    Give the Christians pot, the hippies bibles
    Girls put on condoms, Boys OD on Birth control

    Daughters drink beers w/ mom, sons knit w/ dad
    Emo's cheer @ peprally's, while cheerleaders slit their wrists





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      very nice, I personally have often dreampt of cheeleaders slitting their wirsts. anyways, i get the point, and appreciate the title, however it makes one wonnder, how much of this, is in fact
    "SDRAWKCAB", I suppose everything is perspective though, right? take care
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol I love this. Unique and everything's topsy turvy.

    "Girls put on condoms, Boys OD on Birth control"

    I would really wonder how lol!

    "Muder those you love, pamper your enemies
    Read the writer, burn the poem"

    But I think this line relates to me. Alot. I really don't know how to describe this but wow. AllI have to say is, good job.
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by RyukiTZR | [ Reply to This ]


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