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    dots Submission Name: "FOOD FOR THOUGHTdots
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    Author: RECKLESS
    ASL Info:    36
    Elite Ratio:    5.52 - 4/2/2
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       The feedback that I'm looking for in regarding this piece is the truth good or back. What are there thoughts on it. It's just a little creative writing to make you think about your life, if someone was to read my poem.


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    dots"FOOD FOR THOUGHTdots
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    Close your eyes if you want to see, your only in the dark if that's all you see. Are you living your life on the decisions you make? Or are you living your life around the mistakes you create? We often live our lives on the things we see, we don't start to think until things go wrong, don't you agree? So close your eyes and tell me what you see, your only in the dark if that's all you see. Are you living life, or is life living you? Are you doing what you want to do? Or is life letting you do what it lets you do? No, I'm not judging you, these words pertain to me to, it's just food for thought for me and you. I guess if your happy and in good health, you made it this far so be proud of yourself..............




    Submitted on 2006-01-14 09:57:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It really is a "food for thought" kind of poem. There were just a few grammatical mistakes, but other than that there was a alot of truth in this poem. "Are you living life or is life living you?" VERY TRUE. Sometimes I want some of these questions answered myself. It's good, keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by shes automatic | [ Reply to This ]
      It really is a "food for thought" kind of poem. There were just a few grammatical mistakes, but other than that there was a alot of truth in this poem. "Are you living life or is life living you?" VERY TRUE. Sometimes I want some of these questions answered myself. It's good, keep writing.
    | Posted on 2006-01-14 00:00:00 | by shes automatic | [ Reply to This ]



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