Description: this piece is pretty much about how me and my dad fight sometimes and he yells at me LIKE all the time and how i try to use the negitive things he says to me to become stronger for the people that might have the same problem or in fact any problems in there life..but othere then thats its not entirely finshed still got to wrok on my bridge part so comment if you want guys
what doesn't kill us makes us stronger... i like how you described what you have to put up with and the way he makes oyu feel in the first and third part and what the situation caused you, the outcome that it makes you stronger and that you wanna be left alone, in the refrain. the 'parts' show somewhat his perspective and the refrain your inside and i like how you managed to do that. :) you're awesome in writing you should do it way more :)
I found this very nice to read. It flowed well and as lyrics, I can relate them to In Flames, if you've ever heard of them, would go well with hard rock kind of sound nonetheless.
I particularly liked how you used much more sinister imagery than what was actually happening, because if anything, it emphasises the emotion you are getting across here, and to write something so creative out of something as you have, is a testament to your skills as a lyricist. If only every teen was like this, the world would be a very different place. Overall, a great write with a stunning chorus might I add.