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    dots Submission Name: Love For the Right Reasonsdots
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    Author: Denese
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       This poem comes from a past break-up and how I was feeling at the time of the break-up. Not understanding how an individual with the heart of gold could be so missused and abused.


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    dotsLove For the Right Reasonsdots
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    Love doesn't build up your expectations
    to only let you down.

    Love doesn't live to tell you a lie.

    Love doesn't hurt the heart it's in.

    Love characterizes the person within.

    Love doesn't justify wrong actions we make,

    But love simlifies the losses we take.

    Love has so many definitions that we don't understand,

    That we take it for granted instead of in God's hand.

    So next time you love, love for the right reason,

    For when love comes again you won't miss the season.




    Submitted on 2006-01-15 09:45:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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