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beauty a curse, who would have guessed? the wieght to be a specimen greater than the rest setting aside the flaw of beauty we might realize that not focusing on beauty may be attempting to try to relate to a person for a reason or a cause realizing that judgement is the biggest flaw of all |
it's short and straight to the point... a spelling mistake on the first line could be corrected..i thik it could of been longer..the message is great though..later| Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by Hip-Hop Honey | [ Reply to This ] | theres a spelling mistake on the first line..but other than that, i liked this! its all so true! | i think that you could have incorperated some of the points in the poem that u made in the description, but i still like this! Keep on digging! | Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ] | |