I agree... very sensual. I don't know if I would push it into erotic, because the opening line is very... compassionate. Anyways, I like the phrasing of it. And the "to the point" of it :D Thanks for a good read!
I not only enjoyed the simplicity of this piece, but also the pure and raw beauty in the simple phrasings. Also i appreciated the placement of the wording. i find it gave a certain sexiness to the piece. Thanks for sharing!
this is so erotic, sentual, emotional and so sexy...just in these few words..god i love it..i am very selective on my favorites addition. this is mastory and it will be added..please check out my work sometime..it would be much appreciated..im going on to read more of your stuff because this was so wonderful. xoxoxox reeses
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