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    dots Submission Name: Until I Fadedots
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    Author: kapri49
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 31/69/30
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 171
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 475



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       I didn't write this i don't know where it came from...I copied it from somewhere a long time ago and don't know where...


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    dotsUntil I Fadedots
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    When your hurt I listen to you
    I open my hand and take it in
    I close my fist and your better
    I hold on to all the pain and frustration
    So they do not hurt you anymore
    But when I'm in despair I'm all alone
    Left to deal with it myself
    So I open my fist
    And see if there's anything that can help me
    But all I'm left with is
    More hurt, more anger, more emptiness
    Until I fade away




    Submitted on 2006-01-15 21:10:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "I didn't write this i don't know where it came from...I copied it from somewhere a long time ago and don't know where..."

    Then, i don't understand your purpose for submitting. i was under the impression this was a self writting submission website in which you submit your own work.
    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by Cannablisjunkie | [ Reply to This ]
      this is wat i am feeling right now..it is not a good feeling at all..its hard to have a relationship of any kind when both ppl are dependant and unstable..at least thats what i got from it...this is great and even tho its not yours im so glad you posted it..but more than glad you didnt take credit for it..you are a good person...my poetry is stolen from me all the time...
    xoxox
    Reeses
    p.s. please check out some of my work...
    | Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by Numb | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, this poem, for whatever you held onto it for is quite powerful. I know exactly the feeling that it's describing, and if you discover it, you'll wish you hadn't in a lot of ways. It's a good poem, keep holding onto it.
    Regards, Kalinda
    | Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ]



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