Nothing In Common by kapri49

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Author:	kapri49
ASL Info:	16/f/canada
Elite Ratio:	2.55 - 31/69/30
Words:	86

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	180
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	551

Description:
I wrote this while me and my boyfriend we talking online...well not talking...we've been going out for a very short time...and had more problems then most couples have in a lifetime...but somehow got through it all....but the problems just keep comin

Nothing In Common dots

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How did it get so bad?
Where did we go wrong?
When did we run outta things to say?
Don't tell me the spark is dying
Don't say we have nothing in common
Cuz I won't give up that easy
I won't say good bye
I won't cry

Just yesterday we were talking
Yesterday we were fine
Love doesn't die overnight
It just tries to hide
We gotta keep looking
It's here, somewhere close by
We'll make it, if we try

Submitted on 2006-01-15 21:30:19 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Aww...It's cute. I like it. I think it hits your problems (as described in your description) very well and reveals a wealth of feeling. Desire to make it work is something many people lack and I applaud your effort to do so here.
| Posted on 2006-09-09 00:00:00 | by Lessa Solarem | [ Reply to This ]
  Kind of a fairy tale-ish concept, specifically that one cannot fall in and out of love over night. you see love is a fixation to chemicals in the body that you're addicted to. chemicals that another person, place, or thing influences inside of you.

so to actually say that love cannot actually turn out to be such a harsh reality is false. and to wanna stick around in a relationship that's falling apart is just unhealthy, but that's my own personal opinion.

thanks for sharing
| Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by Cannablisjunkie | [ Reply to This ]
  this poem really works well, i like how you've mixed the "god, why me?" feel with the "there is no way i'm letting you go" vibe. it works well!
Its nice that you've managed to fit a mini story in a short poem!
i hope that you and your boyfriend will say together!
Keep on keeping on!
| Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ]
  hey, i like the poem, i love the ones that roll off the tongue... one hint though, try extending the 2nd stanza to eight lines, so it fits with the first.
| Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by The41stSmibble | [ Reply to This ]
  I quite like the emotion in this poem. It seems to show two different sides, like you wrote the first half when you were arguing and the second half after, when you were trying to make up. A good read
Regards, Kalinda
| Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by Kalinda | [ Reply to This ]

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