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    dots Submission Name: Vastdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 9
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
    Total Views: 667
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 84

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    My Spir"IT" as vast
    universes unexplored
    colored hue unnamed

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      This one to any of your regular readers is self explanatory
    You are again showing us your readers we are in charge of our Jouirney here on this Earth
    We have to be be careful of the choices we make if we wish to be happy on Earth

    I enjoyed this one
    IT is extremely well written
    Loved this
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    | Posted on 2006-02-09 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a lovely haiku. Imagine what there is out there that remains to be discovered, remains to be seen. Imagine if there were colors we hadnt yet seen? Wow, that would really be something wouldnt it? This haiku says so much in so few words, just as it should be. Not to get off the subject but they are sending an unmanned craft to pluto today and it is going to take it 9 years just to get there. Can you even imagine?? Damn! Anyway, a lovely haiku! Take care.

    | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      hey this was really short but the words are real when you say them thanx for yor comments on previous posts
    the book is doing ok i made a mistake on addressing and i cant access all the proceeds are going to charity when the time comes
    hope all is well
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how short this is, and how it really makes you wonder. Leaving the reader on the edge making them think of things unexplained it amazing. Great job.
    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      What colours are there in the universe yet to be discovered. What a thought that is. Oh and your poem was very good as well !

    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, this brings to mind a huge relm beyond our own. With only three lines, you said alot and really made me think. Good Job!
    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by Elissar | [ Reply to This ]
      I've always enjoyed Haiku poems and yours obviously is. Good job. In such a short poem with only 3 lines, it brought to mind a great amount of space.
    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by Meotoko | [ Reply to This ]

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