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    dots Submission Name: Angerdots
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    Author: ringo204
    ASL Info:    17/m/?
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 1/2/2
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 595



    Description:
       I'm looking to describe anger itself, mainly using metaphors. What do you like/dislike about the poem as a whole? Specific critiques?


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    Provoked by some wicked aggressor
    Heart pounding, blood boiling
    Adrenaline stampedes through my body
    A beast within is unleashed
    An enraged lion, bursting forth
    Senses heighten, sharp as knives
    Fuming, incensed, yelling out loud
    Smoke pours outward from the ears
    Bombs go off, deep within
    Mushroom clouds in my eyes
    Muscles turn solid, strong as steel
    A brawny and burly bear I am
    Fists still clenched, flailing wildly
    A hurricane of hatred, with no clear purpose
    No one can escape my fury




    Submitted on 2006-01-16 16:55:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think this is a very good poem u are indepthed and it made me vision what u were sayn i look forward to readin more of ur work keep writin
    | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by trapt | [ Reply to This ]
      I think you hit the nail on the head with your expressions my favorite part is Smoke pours outward from the ears
    Bombs go off, deep within
    Mushroom clouds in my eyes
    Muscles turn solid, strong as steel
    welcome to the site I hope you love it here
    looking foward to reading more of your work
    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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