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Fake Ass People -------------------------------------------
Fake ass people
Pullin’ fake ass shit
With fake ass minds
On MY damn time
NOT cool!!!!
If you can’t be real
I’ma let you know the deal
If what come out yo mouth aint true
I don't want shit to do with you
Lyin’ asshole!!!!
How can you stare at me in my face and smile
And talk behind my back all the while
You may think I'm dumb by the things I do
But you can’t be straight up so what does that make you
Figure it out!!!!
Usually I wouldn't give a damn
But the lyin’ and deceit hit me like WAM
Hey it’s ok and I'm doin’ well
But I hope you ride a slow fiery buss straight to hell
Kiss my ass!!!!
Oh. For those that think she a Christian she not supposed to say that I mean that literally. If this applies to you.
i like this peice becasue it is so true sometimes poeple need to take a step back an realise that they are [censored]in up the others around them. this is a good work. love it darl nice work.
I'm just oign to have to say it...anger poems aren't any good unless you can channel it to make sense...these are just a bunch of curses. Try to use some poetic wording and come back.
i just want to say..i feel the same damn way almost all the time. This was hot..and i'm not just saying that to be nice. (though i've been told i'm not a nice person). But yea this was cool and i'm adding this to my favorites.
hey right on nice sequence of words to tell someone to f-k off great job and i bet you it felt good too, reading it made me think of telling someone just that sandman
it sounds like it should have abeat to it. angry poem for sure but i cant stadn people who arent themselves either. umm waht else Fake ass people Pullin’ fake ass [censored] With fake ass minds On MY damn time that stanza just sounds sooo perfect like it flows off the tongue. xoox
Submission Name: Fake Ass People
