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I can feel it Seeping through my veins Coming back again What's left of my heart It won't stop breaking I can hear it on the roof It's raining outside Falling as hard as my tears flow It's been 9 years since you went away But i still see you in my dreams In my house You walk past my bedroom door Take me back to the summer of '97 History repeats itself You walk out the back door It slams behind you Music faintly in the distance You ly in the grass Wearing nothing at all In the pouring rain You sing loudly to the song playing inside You were always crazy like that I watch from the window I'm wearing the dress i wore that day I smile to myself- Then a crash a Smash Yelling and screaming I look out the window It's not raining anymore It's dark Your not there anymore. I run to the door And look down the hall Your grabbing your bag And heading down the stairs I can hear you outside now, You rev your engine And speed off into the night You'll be back soon Won't you? Hours fly by, I watch myself Pace the corridors, The walls start to whisper Wind blows throught the trees outside I'm trying your mobile, It's just ringing out Maybe this is good-bye... The house still lingers of you And all i wanted to say was sorry The ghosts dissapear And all thats left is an empty bed An empty heart An empty head. |
wow this is really deep i think it would've been easier if you broke the poems up in stanzas though. i've done the same thing many times. i like it. it says a lot about how you feel. its very strong on the emotions. nice job. | Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by hayl | [ Reply to This ] | nice write and filled with lots of emotions | i dont think the length of any story or poem makes it a good or a bad write well done sandman | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ] | Briliant. I really felt how you did or maybe still even do. If this really happened I am really sorry because this memory sounds very repeating yet so painful to have to go back to. I really liked this poem even though it doesn't ryhme. Great job! | alyssa | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ] | i loved the line seeping threw my veins that really cool i never woulda thought of it its very orginal after that part it got kinda like personal like the summer of 97' thingy kinda took away from it a little..but i guess that was the point of these peice..nice job | ![]() Trevor...~ | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ] | |