The emotions are lined up: gentleness, admiration, passion, dissapointment and loss for the end. A really emotional and expressive piece. Your choice of words and how you combined them made this poem very tangible and easy to imagine. Great idea poured into a great work of poetry.
This is good. The imagery is interesting and classic. No food or drink is as connected to the history of good poetry as wine. It's difficult to give it a fresh look, but you've definitely done it. Really good. And the meaning, I have no idea if I'm right. I won't even speculate.