[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Scarletdots

    Author: solitary_cross
    ASL Info:    19/female/Philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 92/107/24
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 627
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 906

       it is for you to discover what it is about.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Eyes looking into
    the untasted depth
    of my only scarlet.
    Your elegance
    beyond mere imagination
    I submit to your

    You are a temptation
    bathed in beauty
    and scented in pure
    passion. Basked
    in sanctity you
    glow against
    dimmed lights.

    How you danced
    around in grace,
    naive of
    your fragile state.
    You continue to
    seduce this drifter-
    jaded but carefree.

    But then, hands
    began to hold you
    and took advantage
    of your vulnerability.
    Slowly he tasted
    you. His lips lingered-
    the aftermath of your sin.

    Eyes looking through
    the unsweetened depth
    of my only scarlet.
    My mistake.
    She was never mine
    all along. Scarlet,
    emptied wine bottle.

    Submitted on 2006-01-16 23:31:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      The emotions are lined up: gentleness, admiration, passion, dissapointment and loss for the end. A really emotional and expressive piece. Your choice of words and how you combined them made this poem very tangible and easy to imagine. Great idea poured into a great work of poetry.
    | Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      this has a lot of passion and like how you describe whatever you mind opens up to after you read it .
    | Posted on 2006-08-10 00:00:00 | by urbanguttah | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good. The imagery is interesting and classic. No food or drink is as connected to the history of good poetry as wine. It's difficult to give it a fresh look, but you've definitely done it. Really good. And the meaning, I have no idea if I'm right. I won't even speculate.
    | Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by Aaron Felix | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    To written by SavedDragon
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    This written by Chelebel
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Giving written by jjd
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]