Description: This is basically about the deity of Time, O Time who was always acused of such a acursed crime... Please give a piece of your soul to this writing...
Time -------------------------------------------
Loathe if you do the sands of Time
Of what a fool is your mere mind
That 'Time' is chance
At just one glance
And so on the contrary
When so Creation vary
Cruel he may be but reasonable
Ruefully rarely comprehensible
All two are wise
So please think thrice
Before you are to rise
Before either the wise...
Loathe if you do the sands of Time Of what a fool is your mere mind That 'Time' is chance At just one glance And so on the contrary When so Creation vary Cruel he may be but reasonable Ruefully rarely comprehensible All two are wise So please think thrice Before you are to rise Before either "your" wise...
nice write and filled with lots of emotions i dont think the length of any story or poem makes it a good or a bad write well done and i like your picture sandman
Very interesting, very nice indeed. I understand this poem and whats funny is I find myself in a race against time sometimes. I like it and in my current situation it's kind of a solution, or a resolution. This was a good write.
I agree with bambi44, but I also think that it has a sense of myth about it, like old greek myths. I like that. Hold onto this one. Well done Regards, Kalinda
lol, i loved this! i dont know why...i liked how it had a riddle vibe to it! and i loved your old fashioned word choices! everything about this poem made sence...in a non senciable way! lol, liking it alot! Keep on chugging!
Time what a subject that meddles the mind. Its something we can never grasp. I think you did a very good job at capturing that about time. It should keep you wondering never truely giving you an awnser. Your Poem brought no conclusion, but still lives the reading wanting more... Good job.
Submission Name: Time
