It's Time I Talked to GOD by Suki

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Submission Name: It's Time I Talked to GOD dots

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Author:	Suki
ASL Info:	26/Female/Houston
Elite Ratio:	2.59 - 12/16/3
Words:	189

Class/Type:	Poetry/Religious
Total Views:	218
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1099

Description:
I haven't prayed in along time, and I figured on day I needed to. As you can see this was my way of doing it! I just needed o know if I was the only one that expressed my prayer like this?

It's Time I Talked to GOD dots

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My Lord this is your daughter
Can you hear me loud and clear?
Through all the noise and scuffles
Will you lend that listening ear?
I know I’ve been a handful
More than you can ask
Now that I’m older and changed
I tried to leave that in the past
You’ve watched me now for 26 years
So how do you think I’ve done?
Okay, I know it’s not a long time
But I need to know one on one
When I pass (hopefully no time soon)
Will you greet me with open arms?
Or will you turn your back on me
And send me to where there’s harm
Let me know what I’m doing wrong
So I can do it right, your way
Don’t tell me to late, tomorrow
Please tell me now, teach me today
The wrong things that were done
Were not done purposely to despite you
The paths looked so similar
I didn’t know which one was true
God, please let me know when you judge me
You’ll open your pearly gate
It would hurt me to see my life
At an inconclusive fate

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  Ask for forgiveness and you shall be forgiven.

Girl, I can't even tell you how many times I have sat down and felt like I am just not taking this whole life thing in the right direction. Seriously. We tend to forget what is suppose to mean the most to us. We lose that part of our heart briefly. But...that part of your heart...if lost...never goes very far...and always fits in easily after being rediscovered.

I like this write. It was peaceful.

Much love,

Li Li
| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  beautiful! suki! i feel this...i couldnt have said it better myself...this should be the new prayer for all woman searching for salvation!
| Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by princess-india | [ Reply to This ]
  I thought you did a good job with this. The content was very well written, though I think it would be easier to read if it were perhaps broken into stanza.

Getting back to the content, I loved it. So many people often reach points in their life when they truly realize their faults and the importance of God's presence in one's life - not to mention a longing for certainty in where they stand in God's eyes.

I loved this piece, and it's going to my fav's.

-Josh
| Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by indianhog74 | [ Reply to This ]
  One thing that is really neat about the Lord is that He is a Loveing God that always forgives. He is always there when we turn back to Him. Good job on this piece. Only thing I might change would be to break these paragraghs up a little. It was kinda hard reading.
| Posted on 2006-01-18 00:00:00 | by Peachpitt | [ Reply to This ]
  I like it, but i was confused when i saw the dragon after i clicked on a poem about God. But on the other hand i respect your talent. I will read your next.
| Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by Logic | [ Reply to This ]
  Let me know what I’m doing wrong
So I can do it right, your way
Don’t tell me to late, tomorrow
Please tell me now, teach me today

my favorite part of the poem, very powerful... reminds me of poetry that i've wrote about talking to god. Its strong and well written... make it changes its perfect. good write
| Posted on 2006-01-17 00:00:00 | by LongShot | [ Reply to This ]

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