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Tears of A Best Friend -------------------------------------------
I cry tears of sorrow
I cry tears of pain
I hope to see the sun shine
Cuz now all I see is rain
My tears aren’t tears of grand displeasure
But of a heart torn in two
If I had known then what I know now
I would have known what to do
But alas it's too late
I can't turn back time
I'll have to live with my regrets
And hope that I make it through this test
God you really did a number on this one
Yes you did
You leave a wound that only you can heal
I'll never understand it guess it's your will
And to my friend I'm sorry
I hope you'll find it easy to forgive
Just know that prays to Heaven I'll send
And till they're answered I'll cry
Tears of a BEST FRIEND
Tears in your eyes will one day cease and your prayers that were sent unto heaven will bring peace. Forgiveness is a given in a heart that truly loves and know that your friendship was pure as heaven's pearly gates and don't beat yourself up for my mistakes.
i knew the moment i read the title this would be sad *sucks it up* even though this is a nice poem, i sort of didn't like the use of slang in here, ex: "cuz"..i think you should keep it to english. *barbie*
This was a very good write. I love, absolutely love the first stanza. It was beautiful. Espesially the last two lines of it.
I hope to see the sunshine Cuz now all I see is rain
That was absolutely perfect. This poem sort of reminded me of an older kind of poem. Especially when you threw in that "alas", that was awesome. I'm going to add this to my favorite's list for the shear honesty and the poem itself. Wonderful write, and I'm not trying to be biased or anything, this is a great one, couldn't find anything wrong with it.
Submission Name: Tears of A Best Friend
