This is a really deep write In this write you speak of the sad reality that sleep can sometimes not be an escape from reality for if you are in a depressed mood nightmares will soon follow This is so true A Very clever write God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
HI KAate , Wow i type like a crackhead. Anywho, That was lovely. I always want to retreat to my whole and turn the music up loud and i like things i can relate to. I would probably turn up the used becuase i love them. See how i get off track. Well im going to talk to u now because ur rite next to me.
Well, this comments pretty much pointless since I already voiced my opinon earlier... but I wanna comment anyways You know I can always find something else to say.
I like the structure. It's different. Ooo Creative It's sad though.
The italicized parts make it even better. It kind of made me think of someone telling themself what to do because no one else is there to. I dont care if I'm way off with that... its just what I got from it.
I already told you what my favorite part (in general) is, but my favorite lines are:
"Don't listen to them" (cause I think it says a lot)
"The bed will be the only one that hears" (cause that is just too cool ).
You are sooooooooo awesome!
(i like to add extra letters to lots of things lol)