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    dots Submission Name: The Cleansingdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 473
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 218



    Description:
       I was reading my Celtic Book of Days & today was the story of, "The Luideag or Washer was an apparition which warriors never wanted to encounter as she was washing out the bloody shirts of those to be slain the next day. Although she was feared, her action was a kindly one for, as an aspect of the Cailleach, she washed out the blood of one life into the river, making the garment of flesh white once again ready to assume a new life."
    Mixes nice also with the rain storm outside!

    Enjoy life & love ES!
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif


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    dotsThe Cleansingdots
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    Gently falling words
    reigned upon
    the land
    i
    m
    everything

    Freedom blowing wind
    Tempest cloud
    Cleansing rain of virtue

    Rainbow soul




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      "Rainbow soul" that's the best line. I believe I saw a beautiful rainbow yesterday, even though my day was [censored]ty, the rainbow let me know that I'm going to be alright. Great write.

    shannon
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      put so delicate with very few words
    color of the rainbow is diversity
    I like this very much said so much
    with so little words wrote..
    great

    peace & smiles
    penny
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by pennymarie | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool! I love the imagery here. This is wonderful work. Very reminiscent of cummings' style. Nothing I would change with this. Terrific!

    Peace,

    Joe
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      I wonder if I picture a fresh spring rain, warming the tender shoots beneath the soil, might I see also the cleansing?
    Or might it be the sweet freshness at the end of a long hot day, when the rain cools the air in soft breezes?
    Then again as sweet words fall from your lips, they brighten us like a brilliant rainbow, cleansing our thoughts and returning our soul to its rightful place!
    Wow, what might we see in some ones words.
    Great thoughts here, and quite well put together. Its mixed with emotion too.
    Well done
    Later
    | Posted on 2006-01-18 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      Much legend and superstition surrounds Celtic folklore. And yes, your write goes hand in hand with nature and the Celtic way - nice write.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-01-18 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, yet meaningful. Thanx for the comment you left me. I like the use of nature, the wind, rain and rainbows. Calm things. Keep it up!
    | Posted on 2006-01-18 00:00:00 | by nasuka | [ Reply to This ]


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