Description: The second "We Belong Together" was written on June 8, 2005. It is better than the first on my opinion, but no one has read this one, not even the first, so I'm glad to be releasing these already. The 3rd is the most popular one. So y'all, which one is better: 1 or 2? Three is the ultimate.
We Belong Together 2 -------------------------------------------
The hands pressed firmly.
The arms linked.
Proof of togetherness is being revealed.
Let the public know that my lover and I,
Are no stranger to each other.
Stand in shock.
Stare in awe.
Let it be known,
With a simple kiss,
That my lover and I,
We belong together,
And no one can change that.
In this piece you found her. You have contact and now you have met for the first time in so long. You feel a state of tranquility as the pain has ceased. You don't care who or what knows. This is your love and she is hear to stay. I now know that with a simple kiss you and your lover belong together. I enjoyed the saga. It is better than the first. You made your point. Sometimes we have to keep it short and sweet.
After reading the first one I think this might be a little better but I'm still thinking that this one is too short too. Though it seemed you put a little more effort into this one and put a few more details but I think there could still be a lot more to this and be great. I do like the meaning behind this one though. As Avril said you aren't embarrassed to show your love for each other you want everyone to know what you feel for each other. Anyways that's all for now.
well, I don't know if one is better than the other, they both have equally good parts... It's a very tough decision...this one is a bit longer, from a little bit different point of view... I don't know. Just know that they're both good.
Stand in shock Stare in awe Let it be known, With a simple kiss, That my lover and I, We belong together, And no one can change that.
you two arent embarassed with each other because of your love, and you want the whole world to know your love will stand true forever.
Submission Name: We Belong Together 2
