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    dots Submission Name: Diversitydots
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    Author: rubberducky
    ASL Info:    14
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 17/22/17
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       about my public school


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    dotsDiversitydots
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    diversity
    different colors
    changing faces
    an artists palate
    of different races
    ethnicity roaming
    racism chasing
    public school life
    isnít worth hating
    once over our differences
    unity is found
    friendships discover
    and soon abound
    the blacks and the whites
    Hispanic and Asian
    all come together
    in this colorful nation




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