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    dots Submission Name: Beneath the Liesdots
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    Author: Lady Almira
    ASL Info:    16 Female Redding Ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/37/17
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 183
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       Guys can be real Jerks you know that? for all of you who read the poem I posted earlier the same guy is the subject........yeah I feel real stupid now.....


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    dotsBeneath the Liesdots
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    Is life just a cruel joke?
    Is it all a cruel jones?
    Are we all fools who play along
    Is love really nothing more then a myth

    Why would you do that
    Why would you let believe
    Believe in fairytales, in good, in hope, in us
    When you never meant a word you said

    How could you promise me to never
    Cause me hurt, when all along beneath
    There was no truth, no feelings for me, us
    How could you trick me so?

    Is it that I am stupid girl
    Foolish in my belief of love, of good
    I should have listened to everyone
    I should have heeded the warnings

    Everyone saw with clearer eyes
    They saw the lies I denied
    I wanted so much to believe
    But I guess it was a bit much

    After all how could someone like you
    Be interested in weird little me
    Shy, unsure and giving
    Willing, wanting to trust in love




    Submitted on 2006-01-18 16:39:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, all I can say is...you got boys and you got men...2 very different animals. But at the adolecent stage of life...they try to pretend to be what they arent. A cycle of life that all guys go through...some of them grow to be men and some of them just stay as boys pretending to be men. Anyway, just rambling. Nice write. thanks for sharing. I have quite a few friends in Redding CA. Nice little town.
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Men...some will try and sell you a dream...and the most fcked up part about it...we all buy it.

    AIN'T THAT FCKED UP!?

    *shakes head*

    I liked this one. For, I, have been lied to and streamed along. Does that mean I'm stupid? No...that means that I opened my heart to somebody that wasn't worth it. Just as you did. You ain't stupid girl! Hold your head up high and know that one day...he will come...and he will cherish you.

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-01-18 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]



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