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    dots Submission Name: The Journeydots
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    Author: delusional
    ASL Info:    42
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 75/98/18
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
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    Bytes: 493



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    dotsThe Journeydots
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    There are things you know
    and things you learn,
    what lies between is the journey.
    I've picked up bits and pieces
    of myself along the way.
    Now I've found a home
    and although its not with you,
    your memory still lives inside
    I have just to close my eyes.
    I wrap my arms around you
    and you can finally feel my love
    for now I'm all here
    body and soul
    wanting to give you
    wings to fly.




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      Wow... I like this.

    I find the mix of personal lesson and mystic love.

    This is what real love does for us.

    I've picked up bits and pieces
    of myself along the way.


    And it takes to a place where we share the power of its magic

    for now I'm all here
    body and soul
    wanting to give you
    wings to fly.

    This is very personal but yet universal at the same time.

    Nicely done.

    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2006-02-11 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]
      I've recently reconnected with an old friend, and this reminded me of the thoughts I've had about my life and the people I've had to let go of along the way.
    'your memory still lives inside'
    I love the people I cary in my memory. This poem said those things very well.

    ~Stephen
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Spare Change | [ Reply to This ]


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