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    dots Submission Name: E=MC2dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Prose/Misc
    Total Views: 548
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 463



    Description:
       ? Some words I underlined in a book ?

    he he he
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif


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    dotsE=MC2dots
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    Electrical impulses
    lowered, lowered, lowered
    2

    BE

    mass

    low

    2

    present

    Thought
    I
    d
    e
    a
    LOVE




    Submitted on 2006-01-19 14:27:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That is crazy.

    E = MC2
    Energy = Mass x The Speed of Light Squared

    Is that the energy in one instant? Or in something's entire lifetime?

    You made a poem out of somethin underlined in a book?

    PLAGIARIST!
    ZING ZING ZING

    Einstein blew my mind

    Albert Einstein : nietsniE treblA

    This is a wicked thing you wrote.

    What does electricity have to do with e=mc2?

    I loves it. ROXORZ MY SOXORZ
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      Truely a unique poem! I love the way you worked on the process of feeling love as if it was a math problem. Very clever. I like the fact you do change it up with your writing. I never know what I'm going to read when I visit your page. Keep up the new ideas. It keeps you fresh and your readers like me coming for more.
    Great job.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Actually, LOVE is in the Brain nothing more than an electrical impulse between nodes, it just keeps connecting and causes a burned circut breaker to malfunction. The shorted pathway is then recorded, to be charged every time the eyes sends a current from your capacitor in your heart. That's the main reason most women have shorted (Bad) fuses, from all the extra energy that surges from a 'current' lover.
    Remember, the bigger the fuse, the more the power stays on!
    And someone thought this was wierd!
    My wife had me install a ground fault system,
    if I was around, it was my fault!
    Nice to read you,
    Later
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting as always, not too bad. I always like when u change it up. I do agree with alcoholcaust that it isn't one of your best, but it's not bad.
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      This was extremly weird! ... I don't know what to say except that I really didn't like this at all. I read some of your other work, and this isn't one of you best. You are really a great writer so don't get mad over my somewhat rude comment.
    Alyssa
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ]
      thats really cool
    i wish i was as creative...that gave me the image of the ocean dont ask me why i loved the way u spellled words like that and wrote down


    Trevor...
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]


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