Truely a unique poem! I love the way you worked on the process of feeling love as if it was a math problem. Very clever. I like the fact you do change it up with your writing. I never know what I'm going to read when I visit your page. Keep up the new ideas. It keeps you fresh and your readers like me coming for more. Great job.
Actually, LOVE is in the Brain nothing more than an electrical impulse between nodes, it just keeps connecting and causes a burned circut breaker to malfunction. The shorted pathway is then recorded, to be charged every time the eyes sends a current from your capacitor in your heart. That's the main reason most women have shorted (Bad) fuses, from all the extra energy that surges from a 'current' lover. Remember, the bigger the fuse, the more the power stays on! And someone thought this was wierd! My wife had me install a ground fault system, if I was around, it was my fault! Nice to read you, Later
This was extremly weird! ... I don't know what to say except that I really didn't like this at all. I read some of your other work, and this isn't one of you best. You are really a great writer so don't get mad over my somewhat rude comment. Alyssa