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    dots Submission Name: sick generation, my generationdots
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    Author: Laura Black
    Elite Ratio:    2.59 - 21/26/12
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Misc/Society
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       just really mad.....REALLY MAD.


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    young children lead astray
    we were told wrong
    are still being told wrong
    we do what it says
    it says we should die slowly
    we listen
    we partake in the death
    we find our place with the wrong
    we are silly we are stupid
    technology is improving! they say
    only to bring us further down
    listen to the evil now
    any where you are
    buy a machine to hold your soul
    and drive it out of control
    what do you drive?
    what do you whear?
    what have you done?
    be cool. seek death.
    thats all they can say
    live like there is no meaning.
    seek instant gratification.
    think that im the weird one.





    Submitted on 2006-01-19 15:42:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this rant ya got going on here...I also like the social commentary - things are always getting better or more sophisticated & technological but what about the promise of true freedom & food for all.
    very thought provoking!
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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