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    dots Submission Name: YOUR PROMISEdots
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    Author: afsana
    ASL Info:    18/female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 11/9/7
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 191
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       well this is one of my favo poetries, one I really feel proud to have written...


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    dotsYOUR PROMISEdots
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    Your promises were made
    So they are kept untouched.
    Your promises changed my world
    And kept my heart beat running at a certain pace.

    In your promise, I shred.
    In your promise, I wait.
    In your promise, I spread tear,
    About then when we were near.

    The promise left only sadness
    That I cannot bear.
    Now it is broken, and you left me with its curse.

    But I still say,
    Your promise was made to stay forever .
    In a way your promise is my life’s saver.




    Submitted on 2006-01-19 18:52:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your off and on rhyming style is expressed at its best over here, lol. Someone told me, 'If u wanna rhyme, rhyme all the way through the poem, or don't rhyme at all!' Mind telling us what this poem's all about?
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ]



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