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    dots Submission Name: TELL MEdots
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    Author: afsana
    ASL Info:    18/female/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.54 - 11/9/7
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 183
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 650



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       I meant everyword here.


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    dotsTELL MEdots
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    How can I forget the first time you crossed me,
    How can I not think about the emotions that rushed over me?

    How can I not dream about a happy ending?
    How can I stop myself from daydreaming?

    Was it the sense of you being near,
    Or is it the music I still hear?

    Could it be your hazel eyes?
    Or might it be my sleepless nights?

    Tell me how I can forget how the time stops?
    Remind me again of that spark of you I feel in the rain drops?

    I bang into something every time you’re near?
    So please tell me,
    Do you even care?




    Submitted on 2006-01-19 19:04:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hehe, he would have cared if he were real!!! 'Bang' might not have been a wise word to use here, ut no one implied u were wise... Otherwise, it's a good poem, the rhyming truly visible if a proper recitation of the poem is done... PS. u r supposed to reply in MY page, not yours!
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ]



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