I like this. Short and sweet, makes a point. The ending verse I like a lot. Can't think of a word to describe it. Witty? Maybe. Ok, I'll go with that. I can relate, I know what it's like to feel like your boyfriend/girlfriend is playing games with you. It hurts a lot, and it's frustrating, because sometimes you can't be sure. I actually think you should keep the question mark there, but get rid of the "...."
Just loved it! I know how that goes sometimes.. Not the words "I love you" but all the words and actions that make you feel that way, and well he never comes out with the stand! Keeps you guessing and well you want to play too. When I play I hope for a positive result... either get to him so that he will stop messing with me or get him to take things to a different level. I heard a great thing the other day that really sticks in my mind... and well maybe it does not apply... I just wanted to share it.. "Just because he baits the hook doesn't mean that you have to bite."
yea i agree, question mark at the end of the last sentence...
you know sometimes its game playing and sometimes, its stupidity...they may not realize it now, but eventually they will see what they did to you...doesnt offer much comfort now, but just know the satisfaction will be yours in the end...
This is a really interesting write Love is not a game Love is a real heartfelt emotion that needs to be taken delicately Just because someone is playing games with Love dosent mean you have to do the same We need to learn to forgive and move on How can playing the same game help you in moving forward in life A very good and thought provoking write Take Care Ron
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Heh, heh, heh...I liked this and the ending was very funny...but then again, I have a twisted sense of humor. Hee-hee! Sometimes that "L" word gets thrown around too often, ya know? Some people actually take it seriously and not in a childlike 'game' way. Short and sweet. I think you should move the ? you have at the end of the second to last line down to the last line. It just seems to fit better there. Nice write and thanks for sharing.