This si cute and wonderfully detailed, but the line "stupid heads they should drown" makes it seen more of a less matur poema nd ruins the flow. But I lov ehow you explain about this man and how there are people who treat others so poorly. Wonderfully done.
Awww...it sort of made me want to cry. I loved this poem and I agree 100% with it. It makes me want to find this Mr. McFiddel and hug him. Poor fellow... People make me mad. Stupid people. And as you said, they should drown. But about the poem it's self... I liked the wording of everything, in my head I saw a town in the 1800's and a tall skinny fellow (that insidently looked like that fellow from sleepy hollow) just troping throught the gates to town...and then all the ladies whispering and giggeling. So my point, very good imagry. This poem had great structure. Very good job.
I get sad when people pick on or mistreat others because they are different. Differences are what make us unique. Bravo to those that have the courage to be themselves and bravo to help stick up for others. Good! Love,Peace,Joy&Smilez 2 share tif
I liked this piece. Indeed it is not desirable that people should put down others just because they're different. There's a very good quote in this regard, "You laugh because i'm different. I laugh because you're all the same". Keep expressing yourself.