Something to Think about
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okay i wrote this for Johnathon..i love him to death and we've been dating for a month. I'm still a virgin btw. Its something to deal with mind sex you know having sex but not really..you'll get it after about three poems. But anways i let my friends read it and it took them a while to get it. It's like envision you telling this to someone you like..love or whatever, on a umm...sex level? I let some guys read it and..lets just say it proved why i don't date guys my age or younger. but anyways tell me what you think.
Something to Think about
Think about this when your away first envision me wearing... your t-shirt..i'll envision you wearing just sweat pants on a hot summer day sweat glisting down your chest you reach for me..you kiss me i taste like honey.. your lips taste like strawberries you take your T shirt of my body kiss my neck as i pull down your sweat pants finally we're both naked you lay me on a bed then you..enter me slowly making me moan..lust just for you still kissinhg my body you move in and out going deeper each time my moans become screams of pleasure my walls tighten around you you feel it coming i feel it coming we close our eyes as it comes at the same time then you exit me lay next to me and hold me..... nice thought huh? |
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wow. this was really good. it's gonna be another fave and i can see why ur friends reacted weirdly to this. it seems kinda like porn with words though. if it wasn't for the description, i'd have just thought u were describing u having sex with ur bf| | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ] | Very detailed and I love this poem. I like how it really expresses the thoughts your having and well the imagery is wonderful as well. I myself have been with my boyfriend for almost a year now and he was my first so i know how yoru mind is racing not knowing what to think for I was there. The thing is, don't dwell on it so much. The time comes on it's on and unexpected don't plan it. That your relationship flow and the times comes when it does. I love this poem very wonderful and detailed. | | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ] | Very detailed, it seems like a very short story. If you add more adjectives, I think it would really pull a reader into it. | | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Scarlett Rose | [ Reply to This ] | interesting, and detalied. It took like 2 times to fullyunderstand it thorught. you could amybe change something to make it more understandable. | ~sweetme | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by sweetme16 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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