This poem came to me during a small disagreement with a certian someone on this site. He said that my cokoie monster song sucked( ok I know it does), and that I should think about what I post. So I made this.
*Let it Flow*
Raven
Time and Place -------------------------------------------
Theres a time
And a place
To be funny
Have a laugh
Be childish
Have a blast
To be mature
Follow the rules
Take care of everything
Grow up
To be sad
Shed a few tears
Hold a few hugs
Be alone for awhile
To be angry
Stomp a few feet
Bang a few pots
Scream into a pillow
Hate everyone in sight
To be modest
Let the cat keep the tongue
Be grandmas little angel
Whisper at all costs
THANK YOU. NIIIICE work. I appreciate nice pieces of writing like this. I tried not to break it to u so harshly about the cookie monster song...lmao! Thank you for putting this out here! Mucho Appreciato for the longer post :D:D:D *smile*
I like this poem for I know what you mean and what your talking about. I also know were the insperation came from. I don't agree with lorin some poems don't need emotion to get the gneral feeling across. I like it.
hmm... i see some meaning behind the words, but i see no emotion. all poetry should have emotion. You've listed some side effects to those emotions, but no emotions themselves. it's good, dont get me wrong. it has a point, it has examples. just no emotion. empty poetry.
Submission Name: Time and Place
