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    dots Submission Name: Monster under the beddots
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    Author: little_theif
    ASL Info:    20/F/Halifax
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 42/58/26
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 175
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 365



    Description:
       Just a short simple childlike piece. My favorite kind :)


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    dotsMonster under the beddots
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    There's a monster under my bed
    I can hear him breathing
    It makes a whistling sound
    His stomach is rumbling
    I hope he's not hungry
    He might eat me in my sleep
    Maybe I could sneak downstairs
    And get a plate of cookies
    If I slid it under the bed for him
    He'd have those to eat instead of me




    Submitted on 2006-01-20 22:44:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i liked it and it short but sweet it had a good flow to it andit was well written keep it up and good job i am going to add it to my faves
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by EV2884 | [ Reply to This ]
      i left cookies out for the jinn who lives in my room a few months bac
    didnt work

    a short simple childlike piece i like that
    nice write

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]



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