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    dots Submission Name: The bogeymandots
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    Author: little_theif
    ASL Info:    20/F/Halifax
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 42/58/26
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 191
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 432



    Description:
       Sort of a companion piece to "Monster under the bed". Might have to write one about dust bunnies and bed bugs now.


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    dotsThe bogeymandots
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    I saw the bogeyman last night
    Hiding in my closet
    He poked his head out
    He took a look around
    When he thought I was asleep
    He spied around me room
    And noticed I was awake
    He quickly disappeared again
    Behind my school dress
    I told my mother
    She doesn't believe me
    I hope he doesn't come back again
    I've already a monster under my bed




    Submitted on 2006-01-20 22:45:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked it as well as the monster under my bed poem it was well written it was cool i am going to and this one to my faves as well
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by EV2884 | [ Reply to This ]
      it was short, but it made me giggle.

    when someone mentions the boogy man i always picture that one from "nightmare before christmas" hense the giggle

    i liked this! it worked really well, the flow was a bit off in some places, but i dont think it was too distracting!
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice...i once wrote a poem about a monster living under my bed, but he had to move cause he didnt pay the rent. i was inspired by that old song by BLiNK 182
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by L0RIN | [ Reply to This ]
      i saw the boogy man in my bath tub
    so whenever i hav ta go to the bathroom anywhere i havta check the bathtub to make sure the boogy man isnt there.

    this poem is soooooooooo awsome
    the way u put the boogyman lightly
    but freaky in

    Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]



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