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    dots Submission Name: Smokedots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.95 - 895/379/103
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Misc/
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    dotsSmokedots
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    Smoke rising from the roof of my mouth
    Out through my nose
    Into the air
    My lounges thank me
    With a prayer
    We may never be here again
    But who knows
    Come my lady
    Come sit by my side
    You and I are in for a surprise
    The last ash drops
    And your caught in my eyes
    The show has started
    With cries and applauds
    Painted faces and candle lit sconces
    How did my friend Antonio say it?
    “None that I've ever known. I know nothing of God or the Devil, I have
    never seen a vision nor learnt a secret that would damn or save my
    soul. And as far as I know, after four hundred years I am the oldest
    living vampire in the world.”
    Come now my lady
    Let the night begin .




    Submitted on 2006-01-20 22:54:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      haha I LOVE THAT FILM!!
    another good one. you should incorporate some of the sexiness you write so well into a vampire poem, i would be in heaven!! lol
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-21 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweet now that is art I am amazed
    I like the vampire thing it is something no one would think of putting at the end of this poem
    I really have nothing else to say but that was awsome




    Fana
    | Posted on 2006-04-22 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      Since reading my first Anne Rice novel, vampires have become a fasination to me. They are no longer human but still seek pleasure from lust and even a cigarette. I like how you convey this transition well. This was interesting to read.


    Swanne
    | Posted on 2006-07-16 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]



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