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    dots Submission Name: Trust me pleasedots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 108/249/159
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 179
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1199



    Description:
       i wrote this after i have a fight with my parents about them nit trusting me. ITs a topic that i get into fights with them for. All the things i wrote in this are true. I feel like i'm in a cage. I can't do anything tha ti want. I had to write this, or i probably would have done somehting that i'd regret later.


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    dotsTrust me pleasedots
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    THe question i ask you is the same as always
    "why don't you trust me"
    You tell me a bunch of crap
    telling me you trust me
    I ask you why then haven't you ever let me go anywhere alone
    WHy haven't you ever let me be home alone
    Since i can remember, you've always dictated my life
    Never let me decide what i want to do
    Alwys telling me that i'm too young to do everything i asked to do
    Well amm i still too young
    I'm 16 years old, and you make me feel like i'm 1
    I've never done anything wrong
    I always listen to you, and i always follow your directions
    I get good grades, and i'm responsible
    I've wathced me frinds go to dances and parties and enjoy being teenagers
    I see people doing drugs, and asking me to try
    I"ve always said no
    I've alwyas been the boring, smart kid
    I"ve never been tempted to do anything againt what you want
    NOw i just want you to let me live my life
    LEt me have fun, while i still have time
    I ask you agian
    "why don't you trrst me"?




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