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    dots Submission Name: The Princedots
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    Author: Yclipse
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    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Princedots
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    In a room, but I stand alone
    Side by side, sit two Thrones
    One for me, and one for my Prince
    Haven’t seen his face, long since

    He stepped out years ago; promised to return
    For years and years, my stomach churns
    My empty throne is still empty you know
    But I’m confident my Prince will come back, though

    But, I get to thinking that he was never there,
    That my Prince was a pauper, and his Throne, a chair.
    Maybe it was all just in my head
    He was not really mine, but someone else’s instead.

    I examine my friends, my daily crew
    Are they just like the royal Prince too?
    I try to hold on, as they fade away
    I cry, grovel, and beg them to stay

    But soon my tears turn to pools of blood
    Glistening crystals in teams of mud
    The sun comes out, and bakes the clay
    And the artist conforms it to every which way

    The thing is, though, the artist is not me
    But they’ll make me everything I was supposed to be.
    Suddenly, I’m glass, shallow and clear
    But now I might just disappear

    Now I’m solid, an extravagant vase
    Chaffed, polished, tied up with lace
    To be given to someone, from their very own Prince
    But I haven’t seen mine, long since…




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    ||| Comments |||
      This is very good indeed. The imagery, description and the theme is great. I am sure you will find your real Prince one day.

    An excellent write.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-10-08 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Really great work, I loved the images I got from this and the flow seems to match the tone. I really hope you keep turning out things out that are as great as this. ^_^
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice work. Great job on expressing this in such an excellent way. I wish I had a background beat with this...I may just go open a beat up and read this a couple more times. EXCELLENT work, looking forward to reading more!
    | Posted on 2006-01-21 00:00:00 | by MC-Chillz | [ Reply to This ]



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