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    Author: Lauralye
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 1/2/2
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    The Essence of My Heart

    I’ve found pieces of myself
    That were hidden away,
    Parts of my soul locked
    In the treasure chest,
    Hidden in my heart.
    As I grow older and enter
    Another of life’s chapters ,
    I look into the mirror and see,
    Someone wiser emerging.
    Everyone I love,
    Every poem I write,
    Every heart I touch,
    Is another stone added
    To the castle of my soul.
    And when my life is done,
    It will be the people,
    Who truly know me and
    That have truly loved me…. As I am,
    That have sculpted the essence of my heart,
    And given wings to my soul.
    By: Laura




    Submitted on 2006-01-21 19:03:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i realy enjoyed the visual imagry used in this peice. it shows great imagination and also potential in a writer.i wouldn't make any changes in this what so ever. it's a beautifuly writen poem that gets your message across and into the readers mind and thats what a true poet does.

    brandon
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by disturbedx1000 | [ Reply to This ]



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