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    dots Submission Name: The Truthdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Truthdots

    The truth--
    is a pain that stabs through me
    exposing every nerve--
    you've ripped away my skin,
    and I'm left bare.
    Now, I'm ashamed.
    Now--I envy turtles
    or anything with a shell
    in which to hide.

    Submitted on 2004-01-18 12:30:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the imagery in this poem of wanting to hide inside a shell to protect your emotions. In my life-experience it has been more of erecting mental walls around my heart, but for the same reasons...
    | Posted on 2004-06-30 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, sweetie. I've seen this before, but I think I forgot to comment. This is wonderful. I know the feeling... every nerve stands raw and trembling, tweaked by every breath of wind. You just want to curl up and hide. Fave list for sure. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-21 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      Another great expression. I am certainly a fan.
    | Posted on 2004-01-18 00:00:00 | by kblyric | [ Reply to This ]

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