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    dots Submission Name: Live Lifedots
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    Author: Linksquest
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 42/72/40
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsLive Lifedots
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    Unmask your heart.
    Undrape the mirrors.
    See the truth;
    Even terrors.

    Be alive:
    Live a life
    And die a death
    And say you lived—
    And live no more.

    But if you dwell
    On death in life,
    You lived a death
    And now tread death once more…

    Once were dead to life—
    Now dead of life.

    Death makes mortals
    Of us all.





    Submitted on 2006-01-22 14:35:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      do like the message. it's about fear without even using the word once?

    Mir (Mimi)
    | Posted on 2006-05-11 00:00:00 | by mgnola | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. The message is one I wholeheartedly agree with. It's pretty flawless, in my opinion. It's going straight to my faves.
    -HaldirLives
    | Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by HaldirLives | [ Reply to This ]
      A great inspirational piece you have here with a good message to all those that don't grap life and squeeze the most out of it.
    We all have to die one day and if we spend to much of life thinking about death then why bother having a life at all.
    I love the last line, it sounds almost cryptic yet has a clear meaning.
    Thanks for sharing this awe inspiring piece,
    Great write,

    Poetic Darkness
    | Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by PoeticDarkness | [ Reply to This ]



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