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Author: Tom110989
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I was in a very bad mood when I wrote this. I guess I still am ...
Anyway, writing this made me feel better.
Not much though ...
Let's hope everything is better when I wake up tomorrow ...



I’m sorry
I’m really sorry
I didn’t want to hurt you
And all the things I want to say …
I can’t …
Forgive me
Please try to understand
It’s better this way
If I told you …
It would change everything
And I don’t want to throw it all away
Everything I’ve got
So important …
So impossible
But you’re the only one I can tell …
But I just can’t
Because I care more for your happiness
If you would know …
I could never forgive myself
So forgive me for not telling you
Maybe someday I will
And I hope
That you won’t blame me
But if that’s what you want
Than I can’t change that
Do whatever you want
Just remember
I never wanted to harm you
But whatever I do
To tell you or not
It will hurt
If not you, it will hurt me
Maybe I should just forget about it
And leave you alone
You’re better of without me
I am who I am
And that means
A lot of pain and suffering
I want you to be happy
And I can’t give you that
So it’s better if we would walk away
And never look back
Just forget about it
Let it go
You’ll have the life you deserve
And I will look for mine …

Submitted on 2006-01-22 15:46:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a great poem where you answered your own question by putting your thoughts to words
I admire that
Not everyone can do it
Thats why I like to say when faced with a crisis it is best to sit down and have a candid conversation with yourself by using your brain
After all who knows you better then you
Excellent WErite
I pray you find Peace
God Bless
| Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  i really like this poem alot, its says so much. everyone can relate to it in a way. this is an amazing piece.

Maybe I should just forget about it
And leave you alone
You’re better of without me

that part is amazing. i cant even explain why i think so, maybe its just cause thats what happenes everyday, people assume things and things happen. well anyways NICE JOB. i look forward to reasing more. keep it up! <3
| Posted on 2006-02-06 00:00:00 | by heather_ | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice work, shows the emotion very well. The only thing I think is confusing is the first "I cant'" it seems a tad out of place.
| Posted on 2006-02-02 00:00:00 | by Torri | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh my lord!. This is for most the most relating poem I think I have read. I recently broke up with my boyrfriend and this poem relates to our relationship from start to finish. I could not tell him things and did't want to he begged me to, I did we broke up :(. This is a very much inspiring and upseting thing all at once, wich is in a good way. This is just good I am sorry for keep on saying it but every word you said I realted in my mind, I even cried a little bit thinking about my ex boyfriend. Will this is beautiful, and you were wrong you CAN write just as good. ;)
| Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by Tied2AHateSoul | [ Reply to This ]
  I can relate, I hate the feeling of needed to pour out your feelings to someone close that you hurt, but you can't like someone is pulling you around by strings controlling you, you have no control over yourself. I don't really have any feedback, and it probably isnt worth me commenting but ya, i enjoyed it.
| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by Drain_my_Blood | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey-maybe comments on this poem isnt really what your looking for right now if your in that bad of a mood but hey... first of all, i can relate but thats not really feedback. i enjoyed the style of the trailing lines but maybe later you might want to go back and organize a little tighter. you know...take out some redundant parts. try to rant a little less. but i can understand that sometimes thats just what you need to do.
| Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by Sasha Lynn | [ Reply to This ]
  Great write, with a good flow. I like it. Remember, you are not the only on who feels that way- you just put it in words better! I have felt this way too, and still do for someone... Man, life is really complicated!
| Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Saaber | [ Reply to This ]

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