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    dots Submission Name: Todaydots
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    Author: Oddly Normal
    ASL Info:    19/M/right behind you
    Elite Ratio:    3.77 - 7/7/2
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 681
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 336



    Description:
       Today is all that really matters and i think more people need to realize that. Because there is always today. Live for today, don't waste it. I just wanted to reinforce that fact. Many people need learn it.


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    Today i'll write a book
    tomorrow i'll read it.
    Today i'll paint a master piece
    tomorrow i'll sell it.
    Today i'll make a promise
    tomorrow i'll break it.
    Today i'll live,
    tomorrow i'll die.
    But just for today...
    I'll live.




    Submitted on 2006-01-22 20:02:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this piece alot.
    People forget to live in the now, Their thoughts are a polluted whirlwind, all mixed up with worries of tomorrow but they really dont realise that that is what is affecting them tomorrow, TODAY!

    I can really feel and relate to this..

    Good Job.
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by PoeticSoul666 | [ Reply to This ]
      Too many of us, myself included, have strain our brains to get this message across that we learned through life's more brutal experiences. You've done it very well here, and very succinctly. This draws a compromise between 'too long' pieces that offer a piece of an experience, and one-liner clichés. I think you made the right choices here.

    ~scienceyear~
    | Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by scienceyear | [ Reply to This ]


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