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    dots Submission Name: Solitarydots
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    Author: frozenconscienc
    ASL Info:    17/f/md
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 91/55/13
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 892
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 587



    Description:
       Forced to go to church. I'm an atheist so that wasn't fun, but I sat there obediently.


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    Sit as quiet as you can
    Or they'll know your secret
    Keep your attention span
    Or you'll become a suspect
    Listen to Pastor Dan
    Or you'll be accused
    Don't follow the heathens that ran
    Or it's banishment for you
    So don't stick it to the man
    Or you'll have no family
    Hide your heart is the command
    Or it's hell for you my friend
    There's no use fighting the man
    Or you'll end up all alone
    Sit as quiet as you can
    You will not be condoned




    Submitted on 2006-01-22 20:20:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha! HA! This reminds me of the catholic church that I went too when I was young as well. It was like everything you did was somehow wrong, but they still expected you to be pure, ya know? Organized religion boggles me most of the time. But then you have that cell phone commercial on TV now that cracks me up about, "Its my little way of sticking it to the man."
    "But...you are the man, so arent you sticking it to yourself?"
    "Maybe."

    that cracks me up. Anyway, thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really interesting and much deeper write then it looks to be
    I was in those same shows
    I know where you are coming from
    I just want you to know that we all need to make this choice ourselves
    We must be at peace with our choice of religion and accept it
    I for one do not consider myself any specific type of religion
    I base my love and belief in God on many religions
    I hope and Pray you find Peace
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance please take a look at some of my posts and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      im not sure what this is about but it sounds a bit like you are being condemed for basically just being yourself possibly at your church or youth group ... im sorry to hear this... it used to be this way with me but our youth now has its own church and we do things more based on God and becoming closer to him than appearance or sitting silently thorough a service... maybe you should just look for a place of worship with a more comftorble setting that way you can pay attention to the meaning other than worrying about being condemed ...

    wishes you the best
    kerri
    | Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by blacktearz | [ Reply to This ]


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