Did you really think that I love you?
Did you really think that I long for you?
Did you really think that I want you?
Yes, I have loved you all this time,
Longing to be with someone like you, so divine
And I want you only as mine.
Did you really think that I cannot live without you?
Did you really think that I only concentrate on you?
Did you really think that I am just another one of them after you?
Yes, I'm actually dying here without your presence;
Yes, my attention is directed towards
The very space you occupy and everything you do;
But no, I am not like anyone else,
For I am truly in love with you.
| Ah a nice love poem. Why do we fall in love? Too painful if u ask me. Good write, flows nicely. Me likey.|
|| Posted on 2006-05-07 00:00:00 | by Soph | [ Reply to This ] || This is easy to grasp...ask the question...give the answer. Like a recipe, this piece could use a little more UMMPHH! (flow) Overall, a nice piece of poetic expression.||| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by Mr. Amateur | [ Reply to This ] || I agree, this woud have been easier to read if it had more flow to it, but it still speaks volumes of emotion. I can definately relate to how you feel with this. I just hope you let whoever you are in love with know about it as soon as possible. Never and I mean NEVER wait to tell someone, it may just be too late if you do.||| Posted on 2006-01-23 00:00:00 | by ThisIsMyLfe | [ Reply to This ] || great feeling...this one doesnt have to flow to stand out. you've got passion, and admiration. It could use a bit more flow, though just to make it easier to read.||| Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by xsweetangelkiss | [ Reply to This ] || i love this...it explains the exact situation i am in now...there is nothing to say but this is great..like totally awesome..short and rite to the point...i love it..totally going to the favorites..good job..loves it...kk well keep this up...kelly||| Posted on 2006-01-22 00:00:00 | by bleedinbabygrl8 | [ Reply to This ] |